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drrams
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 3:32 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Hari..Naanu aTheyTha purinJiDhey, made me to remember my childhood days, good icon_smile.gif .
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 11:10 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Kanasu

MaDhimayanGiDha JaamaDhoGe
OnDhu "documentary cinema".

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 11:51 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Not a Haiku...just a thought...

Akka

AnDhu JaKKale HaNNuGaaGi sanDe aaki
InDhu ThammaGa kaSHta enDhu
HaBBaDha aaya seley uttu oDha nee
"Dhevaru".

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 11:12 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Hari..both were excellent.
In particular.."Akka" - sensitive-aa touch-u maadibuTTeyThavaa....BHaravaney-yey anuBhaviChi aa character-aavey maari BHaraDhanGey ThoRiRa. excellent indeed. icon_smile.gif icon_smile.gif

One more from this end....

Avana GaeNa

KaLLiLLaa koTTeyo kaNNaaGi kaTTiBBa
SoakKaaDha selanDhi baley


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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 1:52 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Hi Ram,

It's been some time since I could give a decent thought.

SelanDhi BaLey, well, I think you are talking about woven dreams which will not yield results even in a thousand years. Correct me if Iam wrong.

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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 4:09 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Hi Hari..nice to see u again icon_smile.gif

Nee ollangey purinjibbey endhu nenchaney...
Kallilla kottey : amana manasu embhadhu kalludhogey maadaadha aramaney (palace).
Kannaagi kattibha : ondhondhunavu nenasu (?!), anubhavachi amana manasudhogey katti kaathundhaney.
Soakkadha selandhi baley : selandhi baley-adhu soakka attara; adhey samayadho selandhi baleya dhaaraachi azhichileyu adhu thiragi thiragi kattira.

Theme: its simply impossible to erase/demolish her thoughts or we would say… memories from his heart if xx or xy or even he himself wants to do so.

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PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2006 11:03 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Excellent. What else can I say? Period.

But Ram, when its too non-detailed, don't you think that a haiku/poem becomes less enjoyable? Well, maybe we shouldn't stretch our minds too much where the innate meaning of the verses in itself becomes obscure although they were conceived at a higher plane of thinking.

Your opinion please.

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PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2006 11:44 am Reply with quoteBack to top

SaKKaNNu

Iru aGulu makkava kaathu
oDalellaa muLLu

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PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2006 10:21 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Hari its really touching one.
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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 4:21 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Yes Hari, u r right. I can realize that it would be quite difficult for all kinds of people to understand the exact meaning if we write a set of words/sentences in a poetic fashion (in tamil…the so called…uvamai ani/ uruvaga ani) to describe a concept. For ur kind info, I used to write verses/poems with perfect grammar in tamil during my school and college days and, that continues here as well to some extent although the language is different. Well, taking ur point of general interest into account…I’ll try to write as simple as possible icon_smile.gif .

By the way, “SaKKaNNu”…U might have written as simple haiku/riddle ….if I’m not wrong. But my focus is bit different.

Ondhu owwe/appa nondhu-nosudhu, paadupattu, kastava thaa ethy, thanna makkava sakki dhavey/dhaney embhadhuna ella aradhaleyu makka dhoddidha udaney makkaandhatha joli aara embhadhugaagi makka meley concentrate maadi, owweya/ appana sakkey (useless) maaduva jana… think maadodhuga….idhu ondhu example.

Ninna view-vu athamaakkey attaleyu attiraakku. Ninna wordings-a nodidhavaney enaga thonithu..aasagatha. Thappattaley …kindly excuse me. Adhu ninna own wordings…illeyaa icon_exclaim.gif icon_question.gif icon_wink.gif icon_smile.gif

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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 8:09 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Satish, Thankyou.

Ram,

It is quite vivid from your poems that you are a master in the craft, no doubts about that! I wish your good work continues!

I was just sharing my point of view with you. I have this feeling that when we keep things simple and play to the gallery, that gives scope for more people to enjoy. Nevertheless, one can always write in their own way, no strings attached. Afterall, this section of the forum was meant to nurture those talents.

When I wrote "SaKKaNNu", on one side I had the image of an unselfish Mother and on the other side, a Jackfruit. An unselfish mother braves through pain and agony to protect her wards at any cost, come what may. On the way, she might have a few bruises, physical and mental, but that doesn't deter her.

A Jack fruit with a thick spiny skin, protects the fruits inside (children) through sun and rain, storm and extremities in weather.

When correlated , the spiny skin of the jackfruit reminded me of an unselfish mother.

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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 9:34 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Hari..what you’ve said was correct and I didn’t take it in a different way. Pls don’t mistake me. In general, sharing an opinion about a thing whether x or y is one of the essential things to improve the quality of the same… I believe.

The theme behind your description about the title SaKKaNNu is simply fantastic.

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:21 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Ram, Thankyou.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:26 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Sivarathiri

BaaLLonDhu Jenavu Sivarathiri ;
Ninna unippuna naa



PS: BaaLLonDhu - BaaLLu+OnDhu - Each day in Life

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 5:56 am Reply with quoteBack to top

"soGa raaGa ennDhu soaGaTha"..right? Nice one.
The following may be part-II

Sivarathiri-II

KaNNonDhu muCHaDhey BaaGaaThu – KaLLeyNee
K(G)aaya aaGa KoodaDhenDhu


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