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l_santhosh
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Thu Oct 02, 2008 9:27 pm |
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Kunna battila hethi
olimithi mundhadu manayo kuladhu
bisi maadidha mOoru Aaridha kOova ikkisi
kAapi kudappO kOppayOge dhosi pEraya mogadhu Aa kOokoda kalakki
nAaku alla aidhu kalluppa sEthi
kari-Aadha sembunOge aduva Aaridha avarae udhakkava hatti
Aa koova pisikki thindhale...
Clarification:
line 1: battil-> plate
line 2: manayo -> tiny wooden stool
line 5: kalluppu -> crystal salt
last line: olaga-> world |
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ebhari
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Thu Oct 09, 2008 12:51 pm |
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...enaGa eeGave hattiGa oophadhuDa...
kollaBeDa Raaja maathiney!
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l_santhosh
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Thu Oct 09, 2008 9:26 pm |
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drrams
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Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:57 am |
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l_santhosh wrote: |
Kunna battila hethi
olimithi mundhadu manayo kuladhu
bisi maadidha mOoru Aaridha kOova ikkisi
kAapi kudappO kOppayOge dhosi pEraya mogadhu Aa kOokoda kalakki
nAaku alla aidhu kalluppa sEthi
kari-Aadha sembunOge aduva Aaridha avarae udhakkava hatti
Aa koova pisikki thindhale...
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Peethindu-ibba Pizza-vu
Bandhaa-maaduva Burger-vu
Pitchey eesodhu!!!! - Ee
Atchey Aaridhadhuna nodi!!!
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l_santhosh
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Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:02 am |
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Doctor,
What is the meaning of "..Atchey Aaridhadhuna.." ? |
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drrams
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Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:24 pm |
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Santhosh…..Atchey Aaridhadhuna….
Aaridha koo & aaridha avarey udakka (not freshly prepared but cooked before 10-12h. atleast!!..what we call it as sandhathuna koo & udakka/orakkadhuna koo & udakka)..right??
Aaridhadhuna…aaridha koova and aaridha udakkava…a combined one…
The word atchey was added to polish the lines as we (most of the writers as well) do in writing poems/verses (we call it, in tamil, as edhugai and monai)…hope u got it…R u satisfied??
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l_santhosh
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Sat Oct 18, 2008 9:41 am |
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Doctor,
Thanks for the explanation!!
Eventhough you've used edhugai monai, I'm not very convinced that you got the perfect word..
Seeing some of your earlier poem contributions, I thought a better word than 'Atchey' could have been used...(but still it sounds nice)
Then...
perhaps a couple of our own words for 'bandha' (like 'badaai'...or 'guttu' ) are available...I know only these two words!!
like..
" badaai-e maado burger-u
guttu maaduva Grilled sandwich-u"...
not perfectly rhyming...but still..
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drrams
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Mon Oct 20, 2008 12:16 am |
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Santhosh..ur words are classic
BTW, replied just after immediate look, thatswhy.......
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l_santhosh
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Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:19 am |
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Santhosh..ur words are classic |
Suriya molakk-a nOdi hEgithUmba!!  |
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drrams
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Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:55 am |
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ebhari
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Fri Oct 24, 2008 12:01 pm |
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I jus' love this literary contemplation!
Guttu, is more classical, kodos!
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