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ranjini
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:21 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Rajesh:

Finally, today is that lucky day for me. She said yes. I am so happy. She is mine. Finally my dream has come true. Oh God thanks a lot. You have made my day, in fact my life. Very few people get to live with someone they love; I am one of those lucky ones. My happiness has no bounds. I am very very happy today.
Niru left the company today, I donít know whether we will be able to meet each other in future. I had gone to say good bye and wish good luck to him. He was talking to her. When I saw her face, I again felt some pain in my heart. Are they both having something? If so, why did she say Yes to me? Are they trying to cover-up something? Or is she playing games with me? Or am I coming as an odd between the two? I could see tears in Niruís eyes when he left her and got into the bus. Her condition was no different, in fact she literally cried. She seemed to recover after a couple of minutes but the way she was looking somewhere into the vacuum, her face clearly was clearly telling her diligent attempts to control tears. Oh god, please show me the way. I hope I didnít do anything wrong by proposing her.
The way they both were talking to each other didnít show any sign of quarrel or fight between them. Then why they separated? Or they shared some feeling for each other and none of them just bothered to express it? Whatever the situation might be, she has said Ďyesí to me; must be for some reason, whatever ; she is mine now. Niru is her past and she will forget him; in fact she will have to. Whatever the case may be, I love her and thatís it.

God:

ok. Here is the end of this story, not particularly unique; in fact a very common one. You might be expecting me to interfere in it at the eleventh hour and change the ending so that either; before the bus starts, She runs to the bus and gets into it and goes with Niru to Mumbai or probably when the bus is about to leave, Niru jumps out and hugs her or Rajesh feels something wrong and just takes her on bike and follows the bus just to stop it and make her get into the bus for Niru and so on? nopes. This is not a Hindi film. This is a real life story and not a reel life one.

She took the decision after evaluating each option she had. She had thought practically in every aspect. Wonít interference by me be just an injustice to her thoughts? Wonít it be just a wrong deed on my side and that too just to please some others without any particularly sensible reason? Itís her life she will have to make her own decisions and will have to bear their consequences herself. Well thatís what life is all about, you make decisions everyday some important and some not so, some right and some not that right, only time will tell if those decisions would make you happy or not in the long term. There is nothing like the so-called ďHappily Ever AfterĒ, Lifeís not that simple, where would be the fun in Life if it was that simple?

THE END

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sandeepram
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Joined: 19 Dec 2007
Posts: 11

PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:47 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Hey Ranjini,,,

Appriciate u r work.... It was aswsome story.... I became so much involved in the char... I could see myself in someplace...

Any one thing that let me down is "SHE" taking a practical decision.... I am bit biased towards as u say about hindi movies.... So might be i never felt it was a happy ending icon_sad.gif

Everyone will like the ending too... i guess icon_wink.gif
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